Red Moon

All eyes stare up in the night sky.
An amazing red moon stares back.
All these questions, but no real reply.
Red moon, red moon, who are you?

All thoughts of creation stop dead in their tracks.
Cosmic awareness is beginning to show itself.
It's hard to focus on the truth in the cracks.
It's even harder to understand books on the shelf.

All visions are becoming untangled.
Life's awakened realization is in the blood moon.
All sight will be strangled, 
The truth shall unleash itself soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Peterson Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 1:16 PM
I enjoyed your cryptic, mystical poem and reveled in trying to untangle the tendrils of your rhyme. Congratulations.
Hamilton Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 4:02 PM
nice take Felisha congrats on win hugs
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, felisha
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 6:08 PM
This feels a bit ominous.
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