Red Mat

The red mat with
a dusty sheet
rolling on the floor, the tongue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 20, 2016 at 11:53 AM
auro, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:47 AM
auro, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 20, 2015 at 2:53 PM
AURO, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Nice haiku, auro. - oxox Anne-Lise
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