red kangaroos

red kangaroos
box their way to final round:
winner takes the doe

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Rowena Velasco

July 23, 2025 at 4:40 AM

Christine, this haiku brilliantly captures the energy and spirit of the red kangaroos with concise and vivid imagery. The final line packs a clever punch—simple, sharp, and memorable. A great example of haiku’s power to tell a story in just a few words!

Christine Watts

August 1, 2025 at 4:57 PM

Hi Rowena Thank you for your review I enjoy the challenge of haiku and being an Aussie I thought this one might be Ok One needs a good Satori line to complete the other lines Cheers Christine