Red Jewels In the Pomegranates

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow
Inside the doors where the bowls brim in a pink glow
Beside the river where your warmth melts in my shiver
There I would like to release my red birds in blue quiver
Birds playing perching pecking and penning lyrics
Birds leaning lavishly on the lovely luscious lychees
Jingly the waves arrive at the bank looking in purple envy
At the drunk birds satiating their lust in the chocolate glee

Open your dense door for I have to write a poem right now
Come on the dance floor or the river shore as you choose
Whisper in my waiting ears what poems you wish and how
The air is tipsy the moments gypsies please do not refuse                                             
Come dear, time passes, my words are in a marvelous flow
In the starlight where my pomegranates expectantly glow
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April 8, 2016
For A First Line Prompt - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/3/2016 11:49:00 AM
What an amazing write with awesome imagery! Wonderful piece that I enjoyed reading! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:09:00 PM
Your comment is a prize that my fond poem failed to earn in the contest that inspired it.... thanks my young friend....love and regards....
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