Tim B Poet Couplet

Red Ink

As I ponder so weak and weary
I read your story, it was dreary.

No need to thank me for the markup
I digress, is this the wrong tree to bark up?

However red your paper might be
Loving eyes did set it gently free,

Of errors do I speak unjust?
My quill made many a thrust.

I hope you find that I loved it too
Wrote entirely over, just for you.

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Russell Sivey February 17, 2014 at 12:44 AM This is quite the intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a fabulous poem, such a grand piece! Great Work!!

Cherl Dunn February 16, 2014 at 7:51 PM My dearest friend and lover of history i love this poem that you've pennned tonight and so I've made one for you of a time period i love also it is called the coloseum and i am about to release unto the post mark of the soup. check it out. cheri

Michael Alexander February 16, 2014 at 3:50 PM Wow! That's all I have to say, speechless. Gorgeous and beautiful. Thank you for sharing! - Mike

Ilene Bauer February 16, 2014 at 12:31 PM ha! love it, especially the ending!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2014 at 12:19 PM - Comforting and beautifully written, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)