Red Indians

Red Indians

We'd fall like Red Indians dying
in that tall fragrant summer grass
Small bellies weaving in and out
with exertion of bloody battle past

Or a ladybird might catch your eye 
while conflict fades in a midday sun
the world might grow perfectly still
scented in a child's dreams and fun

I remember now the heat of hands
and transient soft warrior bow
Excited screams fading on red lips
the peeling bark on twig and bough

The shouts of anxious mothers
our pleading, disappointed reply
Cotton white shining clouds
sounds of play beneath purple sky 

Tonight we will sleep in candied dream
crows feather lying on our bedroom floor
Tomorrow we will fight our lifelong foe
child soldiers in the fields of war.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Whatley Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Woah! Excellent piece Declan - meaningful, and with a sweeping conclusion, no less. Awesome scene-setting here.
Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:52 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 10:06 AM
An excellent piece full of vibrant imagery and superb phrasing... '...small bellies weaving in and out.' '...sounds of play beneath purple sky,' '...crows feather lying on our bedroom floor,' Well done Declan! Best wishes, Keith
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 12:05 PM
...me too!!! :)
Molloy Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Keith... I'm wishing for summer and the scent of warm cut grass :)
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