William Richardson Poet Rhyme

Red Head

Tonight I talked to a beautiful redhead
She had me hanging on every word she 
said
I'm not trying to make her mine
A real good friend would be just fine
She has eyes bright as fire
And a smile that can inspire
Our little talk didn't last long
But it rang my bell and bashed the gong
Talking,  laughing was just nice
Wouldn't mind doing it twice
Hope she knows and understands
I well aware she has a man
I'm not trying to cut in
I'll sit back and sip some gin
She is fun and she is cool
But I won't be a fool
Just throwing round some words for fun
Quickly knocking out some witty puns

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Sheri Fresonke Harper January 16, 2014 at 6:12 PM Good rhythm and humor in this fun poem, William, welcome to Poetry Soup.

Karen Anglesey January 1, 2014 at 9:02 PM Enjoyed this carefree and witty poem. Favorite line, "But it rang my bell and bashed the gong". Welcome to the Soup :)

Skat A December 26, 2013 at 12:45 AM William, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2013 at 7:27 AM - Welcome to P-Soup, William ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2013 at 6:15 PM William, it's nice to be friends with someone who strikes your interest with no bad intentions at all. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ William Richardson December 30, 2013 at 1:40 AM Thank you for the kind words. I have written a few new ones as of late. Blue me might be eligible for your contest..but that's not why I'm here. But a little glory is always appreciated.