Red Giant

           a mirrored tunnel
frames a pyre of death’s undress…
             echoes of a star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Fantastic Haiku congratulations :)
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Congrats on your win, David. Great haiku.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:26 AM
Beautiful Haiku, David, and a well-earned win - blessings! :-)
Shetley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:52 PM
One of the best haikus I've had the pleasure of reading. Congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for entering!
A  Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 4:36 PM
David, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
A   Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:56 PM
David, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:27 PM
wow, an amazing haiku. I haven't seen the winners' list. Will have to check out how you placed. Congrats.
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