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red giant

a mirrored tunnel frames a pyre of death’s undress… echoes of a star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2017 2:14:00 PM
Fantastic Haiku congratulations :)
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Date: 10/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, David. Great haiku.
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:26:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, David, and a well-earned win - blessings! :-)
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Date: 10/12/2017 9:52:00 PM
One of the best haikus I've had the pleasure of reading. Congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for entering!
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Date: 5/7/2016 4:36:00 PM
David, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:56:00 PM
David, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
wow, an amazing haiku. I haven't seen the winners' list. Will have to check out how you placed. Congrats.
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