Red Fox

movement caught my eye
           a red fox, across the street
                it knew when to run

Heidi Sands

3/15/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Trifiatis Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Lovely Haiku! So vivid, dearest Heidi!
Sands Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Thank you Demetrios! I hope you have a nice day :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 4:15 AM
I feel the excitement for both of you in that last line! I had a fox run through my yard. We saw it from my deck then ran to the front of the house where we chanced to see it burying something in my front yard.
Sands Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Kim. Your experience sounds interesting! That is great. :)
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Hi Heidi, You’ve penned a lovely haiku. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Alexis. I hope you have a great day :)
Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Ha, ha! 'Fox on the fun.' (Don't tell Dr. Seuss!). Good one, Heidi! :) gw
Sands Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:46 AM
LOL! Thank you Gershon :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:02 PM
Awesome haiku. Heidi:-) Lovely imagery!
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Thank you so much Edward! :)
May Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Very nice haiku Heidi, best wishes
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 12:57 PM
wonderful imagery we do not have any foxes on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Jan. There is quite a bit of wildlife around here. I appreciate your kind comment and I hope all is well :)
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 12:35 PM
I see the image fading as the fox runs away. Well done, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Vijay. It ran when it heard a car coming. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Ball Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Great Haiku Heidi. Super job. God Bless, JB
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thank you very much Judy! God Bless you :)
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