Red Dawn

a feverish sky
takes the chill off the morning…
a red rooster crows


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Contest: United Colors: Red
Sponsor: Silent One
3/3/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 14, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Carrie, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~
Raven Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Very nice one, Carrie. Congrats for the win. Love that first line.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Carrie
Scars Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Bauer Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 4:16 PM
ooh - i like this one very much, carrie!
Chircop Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Time to wake up : )..I can hear the rooster. and imagine this moment...somewhere surrounded by nature..Just beautiful.
Smith Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Excellent Carrie...I love this one
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