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Red Bridal Gown

Once upon a wedding, There are guests sitting She trails her long veil, Tears starts shedding Everyone came to tell, There is no backing She knows she can't thrive, With culture drive She has two ways, Only one can be destine Living to born-again, Or to just survive The walls of her home, Feels cage beside And dreams of her life, Dies at that sight Now, she choose one way, Obviously family decides So she became the BRIDE, In RED GOWN to hide The blood of her dreams, Fell drip drip. . . And people there, Cheers with drinks.

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Date: 10/27/2024 12:50:00 PM
Dear Foziyabanu, Please allow me this moment to share with you how touching the beauty of your craft truly can be. You are a gifted wordsmith that can convey heavy emotion with spicy wit and something that is just there. I'm inspired by people like you. Thank you for your art, With respect, Gilles
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Foziyabanu Shaikh
Date: 10/27/2024 8:29:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Gilles and thanks for your words of praise, With respect, Foziya.

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