Red Apples

red apples hang on branches . . . bees gather

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/21/2011 8:39:00 AM

Just dropped by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing this past year Phyllis. I have enjoyed reading your poetry and hope to be reading it for years to come. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/25/2011 9:42:00 AM

thank you Carol for your friendship and for always being so kind and generous--I look forward to many years of friendship. Hugs Phyl

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/12/2011 10:55:00 AM

Sounds like a fine natural scene to me especially the part about the "Red apples" Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2011 1:40:00 PM

Great thought provoking work..Enjoyed reading this one..Your presence at my work was uplifting..The hummer is not the vehicle but a Humming Bird...An albino one would be a distinct white that would get animals like cats attention and whoa be to the hummer..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2011 9:51:00 PM

So the bees like apples too? This is cool, phyllis!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2011 7:31:00 PM

Phyllis, love the image of bees gathering for the sweet apples. Thank you for the comment on my poem.. And no, I am not engaged with Nathan, but he did move to Texas, to be by me. We are much in love and I meet him here on the soup. As for Billy, he is being silly... wish I enjoy it means he is getting out of his depression... I've been bothering him lately.. so he can know i have not forgotten about him... You take care,...always,..p.d.