Red Apples

red apples hang on branches . . . bees gather
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 21, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Just dropped by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing this past year Phyllis. I have enjoyed reading your poetry and hope to be reading it for years to come. Love, Carol
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December 25, 2011 at 9:42 AM
thank you Carol for your friendship and for always being so kind and generous--I look forward to many years of friendship. Hugs Phyl
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December 12, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Sounds like a fine natural scene to me especially the part about the "Red apples" Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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December 2, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Great thought provoking work..Enjoyed reading this one..Your presence at my work was uplifting..The hummer is not the vehicle but a Humming Bird...An albino one would be a distinct white that would get animals like cats attention and whoa be to the hummer..Sara
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December 1, 2011 at 9:51 PM
So the bees like apples too? This is cool, phyllis!
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November 30, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Phyllis, love the image of bees gathering for the sweet apples. Thank you for the comment on my poem.. And no, I am not engaged with Nathan, but he did move to Texas, to be by me. We are much in love and I meet him here on the soup. As for Billy, he is being silly... wish I enjoy it means he is getting out of his depression... I've been bothering him lately.. so he can know i have not forgotten about him... You take care,...always,..p.d.
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