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Red Angled Toward Night

wild birds are gliding
in the crimson dimension
of sunset on sea

sly stars are twinkling
through treetops along the shore
dark curtains will fall

in the twilight hour
there'll be songs to sunset moon
cream dipped in roses
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Hind Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Beautiful images in a beautiful haiku!
Buehler Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you very much, Paige.
Rolland Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:40 PM
excellent poem, still working with words and images, and colors, i appreciate
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Your positive remarks are a joy, Yann. Thank you. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Beautiful hues you convey, Evelyn. Much enjoyed the tour through your pen.
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thank you for your gracious remarks, Vijay. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 1:37 AM
Splendid haikus.
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Victor. :)
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Evelyn, excellent sequence of haiku, full of vivid imagery. Have fun writing poetry.
Buehler Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 8:27 PM
Oh, I will, my friend. Thank you for your appreciation.
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