Red

Red
is the cry of roses
pierced by thorns.

flowerhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

April 2, 2014 at 5:37 PM

BAUKE, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda

Bauke Kamstra

April 2, 2014 at 8:00 PM

Thank you Linda. : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 1, 2014 at 1:35 AM

Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, bauke

Bauke Kamstra

April 1, 2014 at 3:02 AM

Thank you Dr. Mehta. : )

Kelly Deschler

March 31, 2014 at 5:51 PM

Your poem was really interesting. You have managed to get a lot of depth into so few words. A great poem, Bauke! Congratulations on your win!

Bauke Kamstra

March 31, 2014 at 6:24 PM

Oh, I won? Cool! Thanks for your comment Kelly! : )

Paul Callus

March 22, 2014 at 7:18 AM

strongly expressed. // paul

Vassilis Comporozos

March 22, 2014 at 3:31 AM

Deep indeed, full of connotations, full of life's texture, like red blood and roses afraid to be pierced. I'll post it on my blog vcobor.blogspot.gr next days

Bauke Kamstra

March 22, 2014 at 7:52 AM

Thank you very much for liking it. Please let me know when you do.