Red

Oh red
Oh red 
my orban shade oh red 

6 years 8 month  i looked 
for my orban shade of red 
If red is blue and blue is red
Then my sole is blue for red 
You were always right in front of me
But a word could not be said
Oh red 
Oh red 
my bluest shade of red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Pretty good poem. Would you pls comment -three apples....thankfully. Wishing you all the best.
Adelana Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Welcome to our soup family. I wish you success in all your writing endeavours.keep writing
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