Red

red rose
blossomed laughter
wrapped in thorny castle.
droplets of pain in calloused hands
both red





23rd July 2021
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Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Debjani, back to say congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
Merryman Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 7:23 AM
A beautifully, descriptive cinquain, Debjani! I enjoyed reading it. Blessings, Kim M
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