Recycled Paper

                                      buried diary
                          secret pages sown in tears
                             weeping willow sprouts


1-2-2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Merryman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:43 PM
I love the creative imagery in your haiku, Juliet! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:13 AM
a touching piece Juliet, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:49 PM
Weeping. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Neumann Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Great one. I hope that the diary laughs as well ...
Ligon Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 7:34 PM
A new one will. Maybe the next one will become a fruit tree.
Chiri Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Juliet congratulations on your placement!;) this was really good!;)
Ligon Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Thanks, Brenda.
Adams Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 9:07 PM
oh wow... this is poignant...powerful image...i love this... hugs
Ligon Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:24 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Glad you like it. Poetic hugs.
Thomas Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:55 PM
I must agree with Chris Juliet. This is beautiful in its uniqueness. Strong in it's depth.
Ligon Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Much appreciated, FJ. Blessings.
Green Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Wow Juliet, that was fantastic. I really enjoyed your vision in this. The sadness is felt woven through the lonely lines that are so creative and wonderfully expressed. If this came from a real place inside, chin up my friend...it is a new year and a new future.
Ligon Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Thanks so much, Chris. This one just came to me at my bedside. The past was sad, but I'm happy with the present and hopeful for the future. I no longer hold on to sadness, but sometimes quickly spew it out through poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:46 PM
wow, what an image . I really like how you made it turn into the weeping willow.
Ligon Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Wolf Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:10 PM
You get an 'S.' --- for Superb Creativity! Super senryu, Juliet! :) Gershon
Ligon Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Thanks, Gershon.
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