Recruit Brushing Each Boot

while brushing each boot
he (she) had been a new recruit
looked great in his (her) suit
accurately would shoot
of crop was the fruit

Take your pick of last line.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/29/2023 6:27:00 AM
of freedom salute… HMD!
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James Horn
Date: 6/2/2023 5:04:00 AM
You are right on. Have not seen you for a while.
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