Recompense

I can read it, perceive it
between the lines.

You wish I listened more
and stopped keeping score.

You'd like me to be taller
and my ears lobes smaller.

You feel my ties look cheap
with a suit too old to keep.

You dislike my laughter
and still will forever after.

You hope I would control
body noises from below.

My shoes you find a disgrace
for putting a frown on your face.

You won't say it but to be fair
unlike he of your love affair
I've been able to keep my hair.
So there!

Between the lines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Hello Paul ... a fine couplet indeed. I did enjoy your final comeback verse Paul - Lindsay
Kalita Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Love the style as you use the platform for catharsis! Lovely write Paul! Regards Silpika
Schneiter Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 5:36 AM
SILPIKA, Thank you for your insightful, kind comment. Yes, I probably do engage in catharsis, which poetry accommodates but prose often does not. Every good wish to you and your loved ones. Hugs, Paul
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October 28, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Another really lovely poem Paul…..I like the way you write. Debx
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October 29, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Deb, for your kind comment. I value and appreciate your encouraging words. Hugs, Paul
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