Reckless Abandon

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Date written: 05/21/2025

in a reckless abandon, hordes of biutterflies float playfully about the heath on spring noon without a care; many lovers wish their hearts could be just as free!

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/5/2025 9:39:00 PM

It's a complete thought, beautifully expressed, and truly paints a picture!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/6/2025 5:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Bernard:-)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 5/26/2025 6:52:00 AM

Positively Charming. You set the scene, filled the page with fresh warm ambience, told the story, and left us wanting to be there. A fave for me, cause I want to be able to enjoy it again sometime.(and it doesn't even rhyme !?!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/26/2025 1:15:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and fave, SV:-)