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Date written: 05/21/2025

Reckless Abandon


            in a reckless abandon, hordes of biutterflies 
float playfully about the heath on spring noon without a care;
      many lovers wish their hearts could be just as free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Asuncion Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 9:39 PM
It's a complete thought, beautifully expressed, and truly paints a picture!
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Thank you very much, Bernard:-)
Volumes Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Positively Charming. You set the scene, filled the page with fresh warm ambience, told the story, and left us wanting to be there. A fave for me, cause I want to be able to enjoy it again sometime.(and it doesn't even rhyme !?!
Ibeh Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and fave, SV:-)
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