Recital Unkind

Grass is always greener at yonder site,
Yet the jealous pangs gain might!
Bowl full of spite,Burns insides!
Septic reaches heart, mind loses insight,
Mouth turns foul, starts the disparage recites!

6/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of true emotion. I hate that jealousy feeling.
Sharma Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Thank u so much!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:24 PM
oh that green eyed monster!!! Love your depiction of it. Congrats on your win
Sharma Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Thank u so much!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Great comparisons, Mansi! Congrats!
Sharma Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Thank u!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 12:33 PM
- I visit your poem Mansi, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sharma Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 1:32 PM
And i appreciate that a lot! Thank u so much, your words encourage me to write more!!! Bear hugs!!! :)
May Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Congrats on your win Mansi
Sharma Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank u so much! :)
One Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:27 AM
What can you do about the jealous ones... bitterness and spite does not help anyone Mansi.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Sharma Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Sooo true! Thank u so much for liking and on the placement! :)
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