OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'
RECEPTION variants appear widely admired then disappear in face of human passion transformed by sense& intention as conscience & rage awakens shaped by visual space reminiscent transmuted by experience & willed ordiliness apprehended then suspended in meditation & natural intutive disposition
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