Reception

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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

RECEPTION
variants
  appear
widely admired
then
disappear
in
face
of human
      passion
transformed
by
sense&
intention
as
conscience
 & rage
  awakens
shaped
by
visual space
reminiscent
transmuted
by
  experience
&
willed
  ordiliness
apprehended
then
suspended
in
meditation
&
natural
intutive
   disposition

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