recap: remains ''un'' resolve

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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: Released 02/12/2024 Returned 04/18/2024
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fulfills an hourglass and more can fill a whole beach~ and not made of sand

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/19/2024 5:29:00 AM

a masterful Senyru! It left me a little breathless. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/19/2024 6:12:00 AM

A happy write, Sara, equally breathless, my friend. Aloha, William

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/19/2024 3:15:00 AM

Brilliant idea. You are become one of our best poets.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/19/2024 6:09:00 AM

A Senryu poem, and a riddle to crack--ah! The poetic poses--a definitive honor, with such encouragement that's beyond measure, Victor, mahalo, William