Recalling

There's a tightness in my limbs
   A tension in my heart
There's a chill in my spinal cord
   Pain is tearing me apart

A cry wells up from deep within me
   Stifled at my lips
My knees give way when walking
   Curse my arthritic hips

Yet my head is clear
   The brain still hums
At least when I sit down

Let my parchment overflow 
   With joy, recalling
My bride's fresh white wedding gown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:35 PM
I like it :) xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Well acquainted with pain, never wed, au contraire dear poet, I mostly appreciated the first few ;) but the whole package I like.
Wolf Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 4:12 PM
I trust that you liked the last few lines … As for the first few, well ... ~ Gershon
Michael Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:32 PM
This is a blast...although want no part of it I enjoyed it...Nice one Gershon
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Glad to hear that you don't want any part of this one, Arturo. May you continue to thrive, and always in good health! Thank you for your encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon
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