Rebuke

those words censure - 
reverberated in the heart,
that feeling lingered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:32 PM
carol, As sun sets. that sure would be a good one to enter into my current Faves contest.
Fillmore Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 9:02 AM
Andrea, I don't see any contests by you...where is it:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Just gonna reread a few of your poems now. I've commented probably to all of them . This one was small but packed with a deep message. LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Carol Thanks for your comments on my works.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Lovely, Carol. thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Great Haiku ; )
Mehta Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 4:36 PM
It's a very meaningful haiku with nice images, Carol
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:33 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carol. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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