Rebuke

those words censure - reverberated in the heart, that feeling lingered.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2013 8:32:00 PM

carol, As sun sets. that sure would be a good one to enter into my current Faves contest.

Carol Fillmore
Date: 4/22/2013 9:02:00 AM

Andrea, I don't see any contests by you...where is it:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 12:37:00 AM

Just gonna reread a few of your poems now. I've commented probably to all of them . This one was small but packed with a deep message. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/18/2010 6:19:00 AM

Carol Thanks for your comments on my works.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2010 7:26:00 PM

Lovely, Carol. thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea

Chris Smith

Date: 8/10/2010 7:25:00 PM

Great Haiku ; )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/30/2010 4:36:00 PM

It's a very meaningful haiku with nice images, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2010 11:33:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carol. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol