Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Rebuilt Dreams

Torn apart dreams tossed away without care...
                                      Like paper pieces blowing free in the air...
                                I snatch them up like so many stars from the sky...  
                                      And rebuild them up again so they can fly...
                                  The cracks will fade as the sun hides the days...
                          And with breathless kisses we tumble in the moonlit rays...
                                   Just when I thought it was me who saved you...
                                     You turned right around and saved me too....

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Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2012 at 6:48 PM Hi Michael, do you know what is the good thing about torn dreams... the ones we built in their place... i like this poem, one never knows who is saving who.. xox~ pd

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2012 at 7:09 AM This is awesome. Just love the last line. It's going to be great to read your winners' list with only five of them. Some are so long to get through but it's nice to see short ones now and then to see what truly struck the judge. I just saw Gail's. She is a very inspired writer!(love your avatar!)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 30, 2012 at 6:09 AM Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Michael. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 30, 2012 at 6:02 AM tremendous words of acknowledgment for one so special .. who has saved your lost dreams Michael luv.. always excellent to read love filled lines from your heart.. great choice of winners my dear on the contest.. hope they enjoy your book.. I received mine yesterday via my son.. now to inhale every page luv.. JG reading on way to doctor .. xoxo..thankxx for blog comment for Jack..luv..

David Williams March 30, 2012 at 1:24 AM Michael cool words my friend, hope you are going to enter my latest contest in your hectic life...David

Deborah Burch March 29, 2012 at 11:07 PM So very touching Michael...wonderfully done...big huggsss,love~deb Michael J. Falotico March 30, 2012 at 7:19 AM Yes my dear friend, I saw the misprint the title... all good now and thanks for the heads up...luv Michael Deborah Burch March 29, 2012 at 11:26 PM Interesting title...I'm having trouble finding the definition...keeps coming up "rebuilt" instead of "rebuit" ;) hugs,love~deb

Cory Long March 29, 2012 at 5:13 PM this was absolutely fabulous good job.. cory