Rebirth

You came to me when I had both knees on the ground; slipping in my puddle of tears lost could not be found. You lifted me up so the world could tower at my feet. When nations threw stones; my spirit was beaten and battered from my long roads. You saw the best in me when others spoke the worse. I now have a new reality. This feels as good as being reborn. This is the rebirth of my minds evolution.

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/17/2014 11:33:00 AM

wow!!! so strong lines mad!! inspiring.. :) I hope you can check this poem of mine with same title but.. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=596000,, God bless you... :).. olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 11:35:00 AM

hope you will be inspired like me.. :)

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Date: 10/12/2014 12:12:00 PM

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