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Rebirth

Eyes flutter and frown at bright lights. Waking again from eternal sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2015 3:23:00 PM
I like the look into this haiku. Looking forward to the new life
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:30:00 PM
congratulations on your featured poem of the week...Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 5:55:00 AM
a truly lovely Haiku Tim congrats on being most deservedly featured Shadow x smile
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Date: 2/15/2013 10:58:00 PM
So nice, this first haiku I found of yours in the back page.
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Date: 9/8/2009 4:37:00 AM
Excellent Haiku writing Tim. Thank you for sharing. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 1:07:00 PM
Great work in my favorite form...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:55:00 PM
Happy thoughts put to pen. Sara
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