Rebirth

Eyes flutter and frown
at bright lights. Waking again
from eternal sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2015 at 3:23 PM
I like the look into this haiku. Looking forward to the new life
A   Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:30 PM
congratulations on your featured poem of the week...Linda
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:55 AM
a truly lovely Haiku Tim congrats on being most deservedly featured Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 10:58 PM
So nice, this first haiku I found of yours in the back page.
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Excellent Haiku writing Tim. Thank you for sharing. Love,Carol
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September 7, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Great work in my favorite form...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Happy thoughts put to pen. Sara
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