Rebirth

lately I've been lazy crazy my sunshine reflects off frost i reminisce about innocence lost and found like a rebound in the fourth quarter ball in hand off the board 26,000 fans and still we're bored despite that we're lords I want brothers in hordes panther style revolution is our idle wild just you wait and see MALCOLM AIN'T DEAD he's reborn in ME

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Woodrow Lucas

Date: 4/23/2009 4:37:00 PM

Brian, I absolutely loved this poem!! You go Malcolm!! Wood

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/21/2009 8:15:00 PM

This is amazing and very powerful Brian! Hell Yeah! you go on with your rebirth of someone who you have the most respect for! Great writing!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/21/2009 8:00:00 AM

Congrats Brian on "Rebirth" being featured. Vince

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/20/2009 8:57:00 PM

Brian, Congrats on having your poem featured!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on your featured write this week! Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/20/2009 3:10:00 PM

Hmmmm. Very Interesting. Your respect for him shines through your words. Was Malcom loving and forgiving? Opportunity knocks for those who seek it. God bless you. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week... Always, Dane