Rebirth

I sat on a hole every morning
to flush my past memories
to reborn as an empty vessel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:07 AM
I never thought of it this way. Clever and funny.
Somadas Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:51 PM
Thank you..
Vdev Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:15 PM
We do it all the time looking back...short sweet but intriguing.
Somadas Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Thanks...
Acquah Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:00 AM
HAHA LOL OKAY I WUD SAY MORE LOL BUT YOU'VE SAID IT ALL.
Somadas Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Thank you Vicki...
Dutta Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Good Idea to reborn every day. Blessing
Somadas Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Flush the memories of stomach and reborn everyday.. Flush the memories of mind and reborn every-life.. Thanks..
Labyrinth Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 12:40 AM
LOL. LOVE IT. So good. Another favourite. Smiles. Thanks Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 2:00 AM
Thank You Leanne..
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Ha, ha! Fun and funny---yet simultaneously quite serious and profound. Kudos, Jenish. ~ Gershon
Somadas Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:18 PM
Thank you Gershon..
Foster Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Wow. To be reborn... is very important. God give you blessings for your life. Ann
Somadas Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Thank you..
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