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Rebirth

I sat on a hole every morning to flush my past memories to reborn as an empty vessel

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Date: 12/1/2019 8:07:00 AM
I never thought of it this way. Clever and funny.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/1/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2019 9:15:00 PM
We do it all the time looking back...short sweet but intriguing.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/18/2019 10:31:00 PM
Thanks...
Date: 11/18/2019 4:00:00 AM
HAHA LOL OKAY I WUD SAY MORE LOL BUT YOU'VE SAID IT ALL.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/18/2019 4:19:00 AM
Thank you Vicki...
Date: 11/13/2019 11:28:00 AM
Good Idea to reborn every day. Blessing
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/13/2019 10:36:00 PM
Flush the memories of stomach and reborn everyday.. Flush the memories of mind and reborn every-life.. Thanks..
Date: 11/11/2019 12:40:00 AM
LOL. LOVE IT. So good. Another favourite. Smiles. Thanks Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/11/2019 2:00:00 AM
Thank You Leanne..
Date: 11/5/2019 11:00:00 PM
Ha, ha! Fun and funny---yet simultaneously quite serious and profound. Kudos, Jenish. ~ Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/5/2019 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Gershon..
Date: 11/4/2019 7:41:00 AM
Wow. To be reborn... is very important. God give you blessings for your life. Ann
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/4/2019 10:46:00 PM
Thank you..