Rebirth

I sat on a hole every morning to flush my past memories to reborn as an empty vessel

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/1/2019 8:07:00 AM

I never thought of it this way. Clever and funny.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/1/2019 10:51:00 PM

Thank you..

Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/18/2019 9:15:00 PM

We do it all the time looking back...short sweet but intriguing.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/18/2019 10:31:00 PM

Thanks...

Vicki Acquah

Date: 11/18/2019 4:00:00 AM

HAHA LOL OKAY I WUD SAY MORE LOL BUT YOU'VE SAID IT ALL.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/18/2019 4:19:00 AM

Thank you Vicki...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/13/2019 11:28:00 AM

Good Idea to reborn every day. Blessing

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/13/2019 10:36:00 PM

Flush the memories of stomach and reborn everyday.. Flush the memories of mind and reborn every-life.. Thanks..

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/11/2019 12:40:00 AM

LOL. LOVE IT. So good. Another favourite. Smiles. Thanks Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/11/2019 2:00:00 AM

Thank You Leanne..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2019 11:00:00 PM

Ha, ha! Fun and funny---yet simultaneously quite serious and profound. Kudos, Jenish. ~ Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/5/2019 11:18:00 PM

Thank you Gershon..

Ann Foster

Date: 11/4/2019 7:41:00 AM

Wow. To be reborn... is very important. God give you blessings for your life. Ann

Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/4/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thank you..