Rebellion and Stillivon

life sux then u die
y pretend y lie
the b s has been too long
my dreams r long gone

i tryed i prayed
n e more i just cant take
never wanted to b here n way
forced to live, now i forbid

i love my kids just tired of sh
it never ends
and loves just a joke
ur just here til u croak

people just pretend
and im am not who am
life just aint what it seems
and i no longer can

no real love for me here its just a scam,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/13/2016 11:57:00 PM
Jennifer Arnott, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:57:00 PM
Jennifer, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/24/2013 5:12:00 AM
Jennifer, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 4/27/2013 2:42:00 AM
well to say the truth your real.you put it very well 'its a scam'.bless you.i loved your poem.Gidds
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Date: 4/22/2012 10:11:00 PM
True love is not a scam...only rare and precious.....Sometimes we don't recognize it when it's before us...other times we reject it or send it away, or even run away from it...... Yes, life can suck, but it is also made up and shaped by choices..... Choices we must live with and learn to accept.
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Date: 8/29/2011 6:23:00 AM
we think a lot alike I believe. Good one here. ~Chris
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:59:00 AM
i come back to this and this truly explains my life 100% 7up!!! again
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:51:00 PM
wow depressing and true 7up!!!
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:34:00 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Jennifer. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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