Jennifer Arnott Poet Rhyme

Rebellion and Stillivon

life sux then u die
y pretend y lie
the b s has been too long
my dreams r long gone

i tryed i prayed
n e more i just cant take
never wanted to b here n way
forced to live, now i forbid

i love my kids just tired of sh
it never ends
and loves just a joke
ur just here til u croak

people just pretend
and im am not who am
life just aint what it seems
and i no longer can

no real love for me here its just a scam,

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Beata Agustin May 12, 2026 at 7:08 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2016 at 11:57 PM Jennifer Arnott, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A July 27, 2015 at 12:57 PM Jennifer, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 5:12 AM Jennifer, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Mutemwa Gideon April 27, 2013 at 2:42 AM well to say the truth your real.you put it very well 'its a scam'.bless you.i loved your poem.Gidds

Walter Williams April 22, 2012 at 10:11 PM True love is not a scam...only rare and precious.....Sometimes we don't recognize it when it's before us...other times we reject it or send it away, or even run away from it...... Yes, life can suck, but it is also made up and shaped by choices..... Choices we must live with and learn to accept.

Chris Matt August 29, 2011 at 6:23 AM we think a lot alike I believe. Good one here. ~Chris

John Castro August 13, 2011 at 1:59 AM i come back to this and this truly explains my life 100% 7up!!! again

John Castro August 11, 2011 at 9:51 PM wow depressing and true 7up!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2011 at 12:34 PM Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Jennifer. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol