Rebellion

They want to control
Force me to live by their rules
They can't see my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 3:56 AM
Thanks Linda!
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February 2, 2013 at 4:03 PM
E.J.,, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA
Smith Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Thanks! I am still rebellious too!
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March 30, 2012 at 9:41 AM
E.J., one acts out when pushed toooo far... i think ..okay!!! I was a rebellious gal...lol..still am... great haiku...pd
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 1:42 PM
I can relate to this one. "He's a Rebel" was one of my favorite songs when I was in high school. You got to follow your heart if you want to be happy. Vince
Marszalowicz Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Okay there no unity between anything
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 11:01 AM
I don't know what that means. Is the poem bad?
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