"reasons Why?!?"

Peering through space to find your eyes ~

Frozen in a tear that you cannot cry

Staring at the dust which became your tale

Skeletons pangs, as you slowly die?!

This glimpse through these, corridores of time....

To pull you close and to hold you tight ~

Feeling your heart, beating next to mine 

Gazing upon the universe, Created deep inside!?

Tasting your Soul; my very own; forever entwined

Your Beauty, this light of life ~

And oh, how I love you; these....

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...."Reasons Why?!?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/7/2012 10:37:00 AM
and I love you.
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Date: 2/5/2011 11:41:00 AM
very good write, that made me read more then once, thats when you know a poem touches some one...ANything positive , or nickname is fine withme my dear poet friend...happy weekend to you and all around you..always Michael
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:02:00 PM
This poem generates so much longing to find a soul mate, Chris. Very beautifully worded and it touches my heart. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:12:00 PM
Reading this very deep poem, my dear friend, some times words just can cut it when feelings run so deep, but you know that all will be well, eventually. It's a hard road we travel. Along the way we meet many other travelers and some affect us and our lives forever. God love and bless your heart. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:23:00 PM
Ron is definitely a positive force in my life and sometimes a perfect muse for my poetry ..but..tonight ..it was only the fire in the fireplace that stirred my pen and it's creative pace..luv... alone time is important to me and to any writer .. we try not to invade each other's space .. poetry is my escape into futuristic environment of beauty ... my own little world one might say luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:20:00 PM
Deeply expressive lines Christopher with touching romantic essence ... truly beautiful and emotional pieces blended together in poetic splendor.. imaginative and precious poetry conveying deep message within and between these lovely lines .. appreciate your beautiful and exquisite comments to my recent post... much appreciate luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:43:00 PM
beautiful love poem....I have been married twently years and wonder if we will make it another 20 without killing each other. ;-I
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Date: 2/3/2011 3:25:00 PM
Good Afternoon Christopher, This so full of emotion as it has left me with feelings I cannot extend. So nice of you to visit me and leave me with inspiration with such pronounced beauty. My life is a little bit missing right now, but I am always moving forward and trying to renew my smile. Thank you Christopher for all your kind words. I love your work As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:44:00 AM
A tender eulogy that seems to go beyond time and space. Enjoyed. Dave
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