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Poetic Form: Haiku/Senryu
Inspired: 2024 August 17
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HAIKU
sweet sleeping otters
chipmunks trending boughs ~ cold breaks
ice ~ one blesseth night
SENRYU
babies all passed out
boys app games girls cells ~ clubbing
kids ~ Aloha Mom ... (a falling star--Christians can pray ~ not wish)
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