Reasoning

Why people pay to skate Seems quite insane to me; They pay to slip and fall, When pavements are for free. For Paula's Voice of Reason contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2011 3:59:00 PM

Good one..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Never skated on ice but almost fell on some..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/29/2011 8:17:00 PM

That's a good enough reason for me and reason to win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:10:00 PM

but I sure do love those skating rinks!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:10:00 PM

Jack, I'll say it again, I just love your brief method of doing some of these contests. To me the themes seem difficult and you just make them look so easy. This is wonderful. I enjoy your talented writing!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:34:00 PM

I hear your voice loud and clear.. Jack, but, here in Texas, we have free skate rinks.. and skating bording areas... why they want to hurt i'll never know... enjoyed,..p.d.

Tony Lane

Date: 11/28/2011 11:19:00 AM

Very good, very funny Jack.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/28/2011 10:42:00 AM

ha! you have a great sense of humor - hope she likes this. i do :)

Annabelle Jane

Date: 11/28/2011 9:42:00 AM

Brilliant :P This made me laugh out loud :)