Reason: No Sleep

Try, try, try
Come on
A few more hours 
Till they ring the alarm

Toss and turn 
With no escape 
Over in your head
Like a perfect date

They did all the right
Nothing was wrong
But why was the feeling
Never this strong

Play it again 
Inside of your head
Play it again 
While you lie in you bed

They did nothing wrong 
Everything was right
That’s why you can’t sleep
On this perfect night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 16, 2009 at 12:50 AM
I have felt like this...Raul
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