Sara Jama Poet Other

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Written on August 2nd, 2025 for Oliver Mckeithan's Tanka-Haiku Poetry Contest.

reaping

alabaster clouds
morph into ashen grey smoke
acid rain plummets 
a grieving heart breaks in two 
drowning within its own flood

angel of deaths scythe
shows not an ounce of mercy 
reaps a twin flames love

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Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2025 at 4:34 PM Excellent one, Sara. Congrats Sara Jama August 7, 2025 at 12:38 PM Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2025 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Great to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K Sara Jama August 7, 2025 at 12:37 PM Thank you very much.

Oliver Mckeithan August 3, 2025 at 10:33 AM Congrats on your placement in my contest Sara. Well written Sara Jama August 7, 2025 at 12:37 PM Thank you very much.