Dakarai Cobb Poet Rhyme

R.Eally E.Ntertaining D.Iscussion With My Friend R.E.D

So, my rhymes are "not well written" after all.
WOW! What a literary slap!
First you "CLAP," and then you "CRAWL"
Back into P.D.'s "LAP!"
Be more specific or more prolific,
When you criticize my words,
Because, with my rhymes, I come on time,
So what you said sounds really absurd.
BUT! This competition IS full of ambition
To be considered the best in the town.
So, I forgive you R.E.D for what you said.
You are only trying to chase a crown.
YET! I don't get why you don't challenge others
The same way that I am.
Because, it seems to me, that I seem to be
The only person that YOU slam!
Are you afraid that you might be made
To embarrass yourself, on more than one stage?
And, I "AM" just having fun, because when I am done,
I hope that YOU and I can remain on the same page!
Please don't doubt it. Just think about it,
Taking in ev'ry word that I had to say.
I don't go through phrases. I'm just fierce with phrases.
"I am not getting carried away!"

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Sarah Hales August 11, 2010 at 1:23 PM wowowoowowow straight to your point once again I loved our challange so you enjoy this one sarah x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 11, 2010 at 12:35 PM Great rhyme Dakari and a great comeback piece as well.. adament lines..my friend... enjoyed this piece of your creativity today.. expressive feelings that show so well..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 11, 2010 at 10:59 AM Wow, Dakarai, I can relate to your feelings here. Slamming is no fun, especially when you're the target. Each poet's style is different, so what gives us the right to tell people how they should write. Amen to what you said! Love, Carolyn Don't know who R.E.D. is, but hope this person gets the message!

Dakarai Cobb August 11, 2010 at 10:50 AM R.E.D, I have no problems with you! Of the original people who I presented with a "friendly" challenge, you are the only one who has stepped up. My problem is with the LIAR and the FOOL being played by him. I do not want you being pulled into a personal situation between me and someone else. I don't need others to fight my battles for me. I am an actual grown up.