Really

a very small dose
what you think will soothe me most
you still don't know me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 2:08 PM
It's funny and witty, J.B
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May 27, 2011 at 11:52 AM
great idea...but i guess haiku is mostly themed in nature - trees,flowers,bees,butterflies,animals,rivers,seas,hills,mountains,wind,earth,fruits,grass,etc. but instead,...you've got a nice try on your idea!
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