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Realization

when all of this is over and still the answer lays deep a start without a finish that would not let me sleep we didn't get any closer we didn't get any closure a surface dive for pleasure that brought forth hidden treasures somewhere in the mountains you lay out your golden plan while nestled in the valley oxidation slowly creeps corrosion locks it all in tight rust won't let it move sadly, as the monsoon pours realization stays there too

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Date: 8/30/2010 7:02:00 AM
Kinda sad..But there is hope WD40 or eventually it will rust through..Oh! not the oil rig cap..Sara
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Book: Shattered Sighs