Realization

The water is becoming clear
No more muck
No more confusion

I can see
Complete clarity
Complete grasp

It's all coming to me now
The fog is clearing
It's so obvious

Now I understand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 2:14 PM
the fog had lifted, I like it!!
Brown Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 4:25 AM
WOW !!! I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this morning Echo. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Nieves Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 9:13 AM
Love that imagery of realization. Very clever.
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 5:26 AM
Hold that thought. Keep writing. Sara
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