REALITY REVEALED

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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks/no grammatical symbols /relying on 'the one breath limitation'/this intuitive cadence permits the 'reader' (reciter)to respond in an interpretative-interplay unique** to the ' happening moment'

*inspired by Rothko writings

REALITY REVEALED *
dilemma
 of
  integrity
sensuality
  conflicts
with curbed
desire

irony
in
 self-effacement
ephemeral
& by chance
 emotional
& dramatic
  objective
an
   influence
in academic notion
of the
  unnoticed
 omnipresent
to interpret
the unconscious
with
  exhilarated
      experience
where
architectonic
energies
of
indeterminate
 shapes of
optical
 multiplicity
enveloped
the
   transparent
 quickening
in the eyes
counterpoised
&
more endurable

the urge
&
the perception
 of self

the   desire
to
find satisfaction
   in
   organic beauty

 a bestowal
of happiness
in
 absurdities
  embodying
unruly chaos
 in the appearance
  by accident
 rather
   than design
translated
into
 manner
   & style
always
 inexpressible
 an attempt

to understand
 the  austere
distortion
of  an objective
consideration
 &in particular
embodying
space
promote
 a desire
&tendency
of
  separation

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Susan Manley

Date: 5/17/2024 8:18:00 AM

A desire And tendency of separation is often about self protection the barriers we make to prevent heart ache and all mistakes though life is about tipping over the bucket messing up the rug putting pulls in your favorite sweater while you play with your favorite pug. Messy by design so you learn that you can thrive in the chaos and the order its all natures quarter I like your poetry. - Susan