REALITY REVEALED

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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks/no grammatical symbols /relying on 'the one breath limitation'/this intuitive cadence permits the 'reader' (reciter)to respond in an interpretative-interplay unique** to the ' happening moment'

*inspired by Rothko writings

REALITY REVEALED * dilemma of integrity sensuality conflicts with curbed desire irony in self-effacement ephemeral & by chance emotional & dramatic objective an influence in academic notion of the unnoticed omnipresent to interpret the unconscious with exhilarated experience where architectonic energies of indeterminate shapes of optical multiplicity enveloped the transparent quickening in the eyes counterpoised & more endurable the urge & the perception of self the desire to find satisfaction in organic beauty a bestowal of happiness in absurdities embodying unruly chaos in the appearance by accident rather than design translated into manner & style always inexpressible an attempt to understand the austere distortion of an objective consideration &in particular embodying space promote a desire &tendency of separation

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Susan Manley

Date: 5/17/2024 8:18:00 AM

A desire And tendency of separation is often about self protection the barriers we make to prevent heart ache and all mistakes though life is about tipping over the bucket messing up the rug putting pulls in your favorite sweater while you play with your favorite pug. Messy by design so you learn that you can thrive in the chaos and the order its all natures quarter I like your poetry. - Susan