Reality of the Dream

In the dream world I love to go and fly No matter what I do, I still go high During the day I go in an airplane Up in the air I go weirdly insane I dream of an orange sky floating there With purple clouds moving along somewhere In the daylight hours the sky is a blue It has clouds in quite a lovely white hue The city streets are amassed with people The dream contains so many parts feeble The fields of concrete are opened to cars Where in the evening you can’t see the stars Zombies run around looking for some blood In my dream I run avoiding the flood There are many stores on the wide sidewalks My days are made up with shopping and talks The poles in my dream are purple with eyes Nowhere I go do I ever despise There are many wires going from each pole In the daylight the sight is from the soul Dreams are cloudy and certainly unreal But the day is clear, real, and has appeal
Russell Sivey Contest: Dreaming into the Day Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico 5/14/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/15/2013 5:18:00 PM
The air is full of reality clouds. The visions we see in our own little shrowds. A peek out in a world beyond. A cresent moon transending dawned. A picture of reality in a dream Russell. Loved it. Peace. :)
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Date: 5/15/2013 8:09:00 AM
Another super wow for this poem my dear friend Russel! An outstanding couplet and masterpiece again! A super winner for me! I'm faving this. Good luck to you, best wishes and God bless. Thank you so much for sharing your precious gems and everything! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:37:00 AM
Beautiful Poem Russell. i love the descriptions :)
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Date: 5/14/2013 11:36:00 PM
My dear friend Russell, as usual your poetry I think is about time to show it to a larger society, to love and admire all of your poems. Congratulations, loved it tonight. Good night. I want to thank you so much for choosing me in your contest, you have no idea how much it means to me , to be appreciated by you. Thank you Russell so much. See u tomorrow. Love Terry xoxo a 7>>> & FAVE....
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:41:00 PM
Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always appreciated..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2013 4:40:00 PM
Oh my !!! Zombies !!! Purple poles with eyes... what a dreamer you are !! Enjoyable read for this reader..all smiles !! Best of luck in the contest !! I've been bone dry in the creative writing...getting a new breath I hope. Thanks for dropping by my page and for realizing I've been missing..that means a lot.
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Date: 5/14/2013 1:26:00 PM
A wonderful message penned within your Couplet. A great poem with dream state. Wishing you good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:50:00 AM
Really enjoyed this interesting analogy-- perfect rhyming couplets of night and day. You described the color of the sky perfectly when on an aeroplane.
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:14:00 AM
What a beautiful dream world you have created my friend! It is us who make our happiness and unhappiness. A lovely message wrapped in a verse form! Superb!
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