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Reality of Mind

The mind of the lost, is nowhere inside. Dreams of this twisted third eye. Torturing images, no martyr could bear. It's the craziness that evokes this primal fear. Crazy in madness, a house of black cards. A sand storm of terror, that pump the blood hard. Fooled in this game, there is no win. Welcome those feelings and let it all in. How are you feeling? It's only inside. How are you feeling? Is it burning your eyes? How are you feeling? Lost and so blind. How does it feel? In Reality of mind. Chaotic is breathing, you feel yourself fall. Slip from the grip of your reality's wall. Awake in a nightmare, shedding red tears Praying for sanity that no one will hear Flesh is cold and dampened with sweat your eyes in the demon are all that you fret. Grasping at strings you pray that you'll live The pay for you penance, one soul to give. How are you feeling? It's only inside. How are you feeling? Is it burning your eyes? How are you feeling? Lost and so blind. How does it feel? In Reality of mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/6/2012 9:47:00 PM
DAN, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dan. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:24:00 PM
you are a very VERY good writer i hope that you keep writing for us,, i like the pictures you paint of insanity
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:40:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:11:00 AM
Very profound poetry my friend...Michael
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Dan Maclellan
Date: 6/12/2011 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much

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