Reality - Naani Poem

The heart is a storage house
Of deepest thoughts,  feelings.
The eyes mirror them,
But the lips open the gates.








(Naani is an Indian Telugu poem with 4 lines,  20-25 syllables,  any topic.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Hey, nice poem! Thanks for introducing us to this form. Does it have any specifications when it comes to syllables in the 4 lines?
Buhain-Baello Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Hello Vicky, There are no specs as to the number of syllables per line but there must be 20-25 syllables total spread out in 4 lines. Cynthia
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