Realities Tides

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to paraphrase deceased singer leonard cohen, 'there is form in everything...that's how

the light gets in'

the golden ratio and fibonacci sequence govern natures shapes from seed to full grown childhood to aged perspectives everythings logic patterns and chaos all just existent matters from undercurrents of the math form tides shaping understandings seen by maturing minds stan sand

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/3/2019 9:20:00 PM

The vesica piscis, births the tree of life; all is one and one is all. Love it. Every shape, form, plant, etc., has its basis there. Wonderfully executed poem.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/3/2019 9:40:00 PM

thank you for the compliment...leonard cohen's song verse actually was 'there is a crack in everything...that's how the light gets in'...and yes, our 'mental light' is the form that shapes every plant, every thing

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/3/2019 6:32:00 AM

This poem intrigues me as I see patterns everywhere, but that's about all the math I can take. This part delighted me though: "patterns and chaos all just existent matters from undercurrents". I thought I was the only one who always sees patterns, and I mean perpetually. When I play scrabble I see three words simultaneously.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/3/2019 6:48:00 AM

happy new year caren...the whirlpools of earlier years never stop stirring the pot lol...scrabble is a good example as everytime we visit relatives its the game : )