Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Real Truth

by Michael J. Falotico



                                               all those words just fell
                                            transparent meanings clear
                                                   a tainted rainbow

                                                hands empty with loss
                                               coming together to pray
                                              hands now hold real truth

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Wilma Neels March 27, 2011 at 10:47 AM Quite a meaningful write you have here, I just love your last line Mr. Falotico ;) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2011 at 7:33 AM hands now hold real truth. Wow, what a line. Full of spiritual meaning, Michael.

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2011 at 4:14 AM Great testimony of your faith...That is where the strength is to be found..We often forget..Enjoyed reading this morn..If for a contest, reads like winning material.Thanks for the encouraging words on my poem..I was not sure about that one and started just to not post ...Sara

James Peranteau March 25, 2011 at 1:20 PM The truth is poetically matched here dear poet ! Wonderful write Sir ! Have a great weekend ! much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta March 25, 2011 at 1:17 PM There is a nice Indian adage. " In adversity we remember God and in prosperity we remember Jeweller". A thought to be always cherished, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 25, 2011 at 12:59 PM Deeply tender write my White Knight... luv the transparent meanings clear.. line .. tainted rainbow.. awesome visuals luv... and the hands now hold real truth is superb.. an emotional piece from an emotional poet.. your Jersey Girl is now in emotional mode..luv..

Poet Destroyer A March 25, 2011 at 10:38 AM Deep Michael, so much tainting in my rainbow.. sure hope them hands of truth pull through... enjoyed your poem.. how are you?... Take care and have yourself a wonderful day.. always.. p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2011 at 10:17 AM It is when we are feeling deep loss, that the ability to commune with God's light fills us with hope. Beautifully written, Michael. Love, Carolyn