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Let the water run And let the feeling go numb. I got stronger words than a guy on rum. Im on cloud 9 but no smoke in my lungs. My energy I won't give you some. I might of came but my heart won't come. I'm going to die on them. Put my shoes on them And tell me if they are the same when sin falls on them. I don't care what you feed her. Because she see the big picture. I know in this christian life im just a beginner. They look at me like they never saw a sinner. Its like every time they talk about. It start with do you remember. He is a bad gifted like a cold black December. I have a trust issue. I dont know who to trust when im having my dinner. Because one Jesus's disciple betrayed him. Colder than any winter. Its like everybody wants to be a winner. But im cool having last place and yall can be the contender-Mario Perez

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Date: 7/29/2011 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2011 8:44:00 AM
Hey there Mario :) congratulations to you :-)
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Date: 7/27/2011 7:45:00 PM
CONGRATS MARIO ON YOUR HM WITH THESE LOVELY POETIC WORDS LUV.. GREAT HONOR..
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Moses "Best Shot" contest Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:59:00 PM
hey Mario, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:30:00 PM
Mario, Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:19:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John,Mario
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Date: 7/23/2011 1:10:00 PM
An interesting poem you fell upon for the contest. I like the steam of consciousness flow to it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/22/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congrats Mario on your top ten win with this dynamic delight luv..
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with your wonderful poetry in P.D.'s contest Mario. Love, Carol
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