Real Or Not Real

You say that you love me
Then why don't I feel it?
That you've walked in my shoes
Then how come I doubt it?
You say that you care
Then why do I feel alone?
So I guess what I'm trying to say is
Is there no meaning to your song?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 5:07 PM
intuition, thoughts invade the night, am i, have the one that's right, ask the question deep within, of him watch for smile or grin, shows doubt, evict the cat tonight damn right... thank you Linda Xiao....Don
Reagh Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Harsh - love it! : )
Morris Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Vedy nice! I like it!
Minardi Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:30 AM
This is fantastic. You should read and left comments on other's works, Linda. So more people will drawn to your page and read this sad romance piece of artwork. :)
Xiao Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 12:16 PM
haha, actually, it's about how someone in my family sometimes makes me feel. i'm too young to date, so i don't really write romance. i want to wait until i can so i can really experience real love, not like the middle school 'date and ditch' type, but the other kind. but glad you loved it!!! and okay, i will leave more comments!!! :D
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