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Real Or Not Real

You say that you love me Then why don't I feel it? That you've walked in my shoes Then how come I doubt it? You say that you care Then why do I feel alone? So I guess what I'm trying to say is Is there no meaning to your song?

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Don Johnson

Date: 2/18/2012 5:07:00 PM

intuition, thoughts invade the night, am i, have the one that's right, ask the question deep within, of him watch for smile or grin, shows doubt, evict the cat tonight damn right... thank you Linda Xiao....Don

Jen Reagh

Date: 2/18/2012 3:51:00 PM

Harsh - love it! : )

Brontë Morris

Date: 2/18/2012 1:07:00 PM

Vedy nice! I like it!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/18/2012 9:30:00 AM

This is fantastic. You should read and left comments on other's works, Linda. So more people will drawn to your page and read this sad romance piece of artwork. :)

Linda Xiao
Date: 2/18/2012 12:16:00 PM

haha, actually, it's about how someone in my family sometimes makes me feel. i'm too young to date, so i don't really write romance. i want to wait until i can so i can really experience real love, not like the middle school 'date and ditch' type, but the other kind. but glad you loved it!!! and okay, i will leave more comments!!! :D