Real Men Shoot Hot Pink Guns and Like It

Hot lead is cool no matter what gun fires the load
Sig sauer makes an accurate twenty two pistol
If you have had a jam problem keep them in mind
The light polimer frame in hot pink or purple etc.
Makes the gun a blast of excitement on the range
All the guys were drooling and smiling like a champ
Hitting the bulls eye is the target of the sport....
Super handling....super accurate!!
They call it the mosquito!

reads like an add don't it?! lol
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Mac Donald Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Might read like an add, but I'm not going to make you angry!:) A great title for this write. Sounds like you've been around the firing range, enjoying the action. Best wishes, love, Mikki PS...I'm not sure if that's a spiritual food, but the lovely aubergine colour is deemed spiritual.
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Cute one..How accurately can you fire that gun?...Everyone better watch out for you might say "Just Go Ahead And Make My Day"..Mom..Thanks for stopping by..I sent you some emails..
Situation Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Don't mess with doris!
Goff Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 7:18 PM
I like my Ithaca model 33 shotgun! Oh Yeahhhh!!!!
Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Those are hard to miss the mark with little aiming. at close range I should say. the 410 shot gun bruises my shoulder.
A   Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Hello, wonderful DORIS, I like your poem.. did you know that i bought myself a pink pellet gun.. to shot them cats off my porch.. LOL.. Kidding, i would not hurt a cat, unless it got underneath my tires... LOL..okay okay! I will stop... And yes, your poem reads like an add.. Have you seen my sisters contest.. A POETS GARAGE SALE.... I believe you would do an awesome job. Anyways, i love your poem, and pink is in..xox~PD
Babcock Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Ha ha yes like a add for guns. Had me chuckling with your last comment. love phyl
Nutter Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 4:53 PM
Enjoyed this pinkish read
Song Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 4:00 PM
I was completely dooped...this is an ad, isn't it?...and written by a fair maiden like yourself! Great pinky entry! gwendolen
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 2:43 PM
I had to chuckle picturing these pink or purple guns, Doris. I hope you are feeling much better now
Guzzi Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 2:22 PM
yike..puts new meaning into pretty in pink! Light & Love
Ryerson Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 10:29 AM
May read like an add put very cool nonetheless!...Love that title!...Got hit pretty good by the hurricane but everything is getting back to normal now...Tim
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